Tom had some edits – always valuable feedback. Found the flashback stuff a little confusing (I mean they’re in space, so flashbacks to them in space WILL be confusing for a kid) so I’ve edited page 4 to make it more clear too.
Tom had some edits – always valuable feedback. Found the flashback stuff a little confusing (I mean they’re in space, so flashbacks to them in space WILL be confusing for a kid) so I’ve edited page 4 to make it more clear too.
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