Redone Doc Atom page 1 pencils

This is a bit more like it.

Still working out how to draw women – so I’ll prolly ink the main figures on panel 1 before her. Decided I needed to move the Doc to the fore and give room for caption + logo. Panel 2 the Marco Polo is much more pulpy looking and I’ve re-introduced a bit of interest in the talking head shot on panel 3. Some of the pencils are detailed some are half-formed, this is perfectly normal for a thing I’m inking myself.

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