Argh. Day whatever. I’ve a couple of days to go before my deadline, and I’m redrawing two pages. Again. Yes, those same to fecking pages. Why? I wish I new. Because I didn’t get them right the first time. Lessons learnt: 1 it’s not easy to edit a page after it’s had the greyscale applied to it. 2 let people see the pencils before the greyscales 3 never, ever do anything without first doing some character sketchs which have been ok’d.